Barker Chapter 12
This chapter is mostly a series of tidbits advising you how to write certain topics.
1) Write about Actions rather than Functions.
Tell the reader what they can do with a tool, rather than describe the tool itself.
Bad:
Hyperlink: Inserts a hyperlink or edits the selected hyperlink.
Good:
Hyperlink: This button allows you to link selected text to other text or documents or edit the properties of selected hyperlinks.
2) Revise for the Active Voice
The active voice puts a subject at the beginning of each sentence, a verb in the middle, and a receiver of the action at the end.
Bad:
The file menu is used to…
Good:
You can use the file menu to…
3) Revise to keep Writing Simple
Break down complex sentences in order to enhance the reader’s ability to understand your meaning the first time they read it.
Try to be a little repetitive in your writing; it helps the readers mind organize steps, for instance, when they all begin with an action verb.
5) Add Operational Overviews
Use a paragraph to give a conceptual overview of the steps before listing the steps.
6) Make sure topic matches Heading
If your heading states something general, don’t get overly specific.
Often when writing, the writers tone takes on the feeling or a robot or telegraph. Try to sound slightly conversational, even in a business setting, to keep the user engaged.
8) Use Humor with Caution
There’s a lot of opportunity for humor to fall flat. Never use it in reference sections, seldom use it in procedures, occasionally in tutorials or background information.